Welcome to another
Sunday with Weekend Writing Warriors.
Here, writers showcase their stories with 8-10 sentences. Join the fun and read
our snippets.
Violet and her Grand
Master, Athanor, are at the wedding of her friend, Tessa. The bridegroom, Phineas, won an award for inventing an
instrument to measure psychic energy. The Council of Grand Masters is likely to
ban such a device, but Athanor approved its use in a battle with Morrigu.
Note 1, exposure to the
unshielded power of a Grand Master can be lethal.
Note 2, some of the
wedding guests are aliens.
You can read last Sunday’s snippet here:
Last
week, we ended with an explosion. Boom; a red explosion shattered
the glass panes in the curved wall of the atrium.
. Screams
mingled with the tinkle of glass shards on the stone-tiled floor and menacing
psi pressure vibrated through the room.
Eyes
flaring ruby light, Morrigu dropped into the central space. Her long blonde
braids and four red-skinned arms were a nightmarish hybrid of Celtic and Hindu
myths.
Tessa
crumpled in a dead faint. Phineas caught her in his arms and backed away from
the horrid scarlet beams of the Red Queen. Sweeping her gaze around the atrium,
Violet was startled by the devastating effects of Morrigu’s raw power. Half of the
wedding guests had collapsed in psychic trauma and the rest were rigid with
shock. His face blanched, Srini clutched at the chair back in front of him and
slid to the floor. Ears folded back and trembling, Lira bared sharp teeth and
spat at the terrible apparition. The shelly carapace of Professor Gullish sprawled
on the floor, thin legs twitching in the air and pink underbelly exposed.
Books 1 & 2 of
the Trilogy are published.
I love this sentence: "The shelly carapace of Professor Gullish sprawled on the floor, thin legs twitching in the air and pink underbelly exposed."
ReplyDeleteIt's fun describing aliens.
DeleteWow Aurora! What an entrance! Well done, how absolutely terrifying!
ReplyDeleteWe aim to elicit emotion
DeleteWhat a terrifying entrance! I'd be joining the bride in her dead faint. Loved the varied reactions of the other guests!
ReplyDeleteTessa is nervy, but many people collapse on exposure to a Grand Master
DeleteGood grief! What a horrible thing to have happen. Glad I wasn't a guest at that wedding. LOL.
ReplyDeleteIt's difficult to stop Morrigu.
DeleteReally an amazing scene and I enjoyed all the descriptions of how the various guests were reacting (not that I want them to suffer but you know - it was well done!). Great snippet. I shudder to think what'll happen next!
ReplyDeleteOf course the characters have to suffer so that they appreciate the HEA.
DeleteI take it she wasn't invited? Great entrance- loved every bit of it.
ReplyDeleteShe brings destruction everywhere.
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