Saturday, September 19, 2015

An interrupted wedding 3 #WeWriWa from WIP Grand Master's Mate



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Today, I’ll continue the horrid wedding scene from my WIP, Grand Master’s Mate, Book 3 in the trilogy.
Violet and her Grand Master, Athanor, are at the wedding of her friends, when another Grand Master, the Red Queen, Morrigu, dropped in, explosively.


Leaping to his feet, Athanor raised his arms high above his head. Psi flared and sheets of blue light rippled around the terrified wedding party, creating a protective enclosure. Dropping his public disguise, his black locks tumbled to his shoulders and his right eye blazed with blue psi light.
His mind merged with Violet’s and he griped, “She looks more devilish than ever.
Let me help.” Pressing her hand on his shoulder, Violet supplemented his energy. Athanor concentrated on protecting the innocent attendees of the ceremony from Morrigu and from his own deadly psi emissions. He couldn’t easily attack Morrigu at the same time.
Grimacing in fury, the Red Queen zapped red rays at Athanor, again and again.

Books 1 & 2 of the Trilogy are published.
Grand Master’s Pawn: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00TP1N5PM
Grand Master’s Game: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B0104OFJJ8

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20 comments:

  1. You create such a wonderful sense of mayhem and unbridled malevolence 😊 awesome!

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  2. That nasty Red Queen. Off with her head!

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    1. Absolutely - this trilogy pays homage to Alice through the Looking Glass.

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  3. The do work well together! Wonderfully, visual snippet, Aurora! I love that you pay homage to Alice. :-) I agree with Ed. Off with her head!

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    1. We'll what happens to the Red Queen by the end of the book.

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  4. Your action scenes are always so descriptive and fluid at the same time! I've been struggling with one the past few days, so I'm just a little jealous, in a friendly sort of way. :-)

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    1. Remember, I'm posting the better scenes not the ones I'm struggling with.

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  5. Fantastic action scene! Love the Red Queen reference too. :)

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    1. I have a White Mother, but the Alice theme breaks down quickly.

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  6. Great action scene, very visual. It's nice to see Violet taking action.

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  7. A great chaotic snippet. Tense and dangerous.

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  8. It's my first time meeting these two. I want to know more about the psi lights, what they can do, and the interaction between these characters. And what happens to the wedding guests...

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    1. Come again next Sunday.
      These characters are introduced in Book 1 in the trilogy, Grand Master's Pawn, which will be 99c from Sept 23-30.

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  9. Wildly dramatic scene in the best possible sense! So much at stake...

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