Welcome
to another Sunday with Weekend Writing Warriors. Here, writers showcase their work
with 8-10 sentences. Join the fun and read our snippets.
This week, I’ll share a
scene from my new release, Grand Master’s Game, Book 2 in my series, Grand
Master’s Trilogy. In this series, the portal web is the main means for
interplanetary transport. But, the portal has misdirected to a deadly planet, leaving them hanging on top of a cliff.
Last week’s snippet can be read at http://auroraspringernovels.blogspot.com/2015/07/grand-masters-game-8-sentences-for.html
Standing at the rear of the
precarious ledge, Violet leaned against Athanor’s warm body and squinted
through the gloomy atmosphere. The portal perched on a cliff surrounded by
roiling umber clouds. Far below the clouds, blue green spikes protruded from a
glassy blue lake. Ice pillars carved into fantastic shapes were reflected in
the mirror of the lake.
Overhead, jagged lightning
zipped from the ominous black clouds and struck the frozen peaks. Cracks
snapped across a pillar of ice. The severed top tumbled slowly into the lake
and the splash rippled outward in concentric circles. Winds roared through the
peaks, spinning dark streaks of cloud across the sky towards their shaky perch.
The hazy black swirls fired an
alarm in Violet’s mind. “Athanor, it’s the black dust. Port us out of here!”
she shouted, fearing the clouds contained the horrid dust that suppressed his
telekinesis.
Blurb
Spin
across the galaxy as Violet and her Grand Master hunt their enemies.
Cracks
in the portal web threaten galactic civilization, and suspicions fall on the
mysterious Grand Masters with their immense psychic powers. Once, there were
twelve Grand Masters, humans and aliens, on the Council. Now there are eleven.
One was killed when the young pawn, Violet, rescued her Grand Master, Athanor,
from the Red Queen’s dungeon. The Red Queen fled the fight and now she lurks
out of sight, regenerating her energies.
Athanor
devises a risky plan to expose his enemies on the Council and force the Red
Queen into the open. His strategy will employ Violet’s empathic skills as his
secret weapon. Meanwhile, she wrestles with her erratic talents and doubts
about their unequal partnership. In their search for revenge, they contend with
the portal crisis, psychic traps and hostile aliens. In the inevitable battle
of Grand Masters, Violet and Athanor each will face their worst nightmares.
What is the sacrifice for victory?
Buy Link: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B0104OFJJ8
What a desolate place. Great description.
ReplyDeleteThanks - it's meant to be.
DeleteOh dear! I didn't think it could be worse than last week, but I was wrong! They are in Big Trouble!
ReplyDeleteAnd the solution is in sight
DeleteWow, incredible visuals. Too bad they need to leave- it would be hard to tear your eyes away from those sights.
ReplyDeleteYes, I should put them in another story
DeleteI love all the colors and the details - it was beautiful in a scary way. Excellent excerpt!
ReplyDeleteAwesome landscape- worth revisiting for sure. I mean, once they figure out how to survive it!
ReplyDeleteThey are too busy dealing with the malicious Grand Masters.
DeleteOooo! Great visuals! Creates a wonderful picture. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteGreat description, incredibly visual.
ReplyDeleteAnd some auditory effects.
DeleteThe description of the place is so vivid. Great job.
ReplyDeleteOh gosh, awful place to get stuck! Will he port them out before the black dust renders his abilities incapable? Great job painting a tension-fraught, dangerous scene.
ReplyDeleteWell, there are several more chapters and a happy ending.
DeleteDelightfully evocative writing.
ReplyDeleteAnd not a moment to spare! Fantastic description, Aurora! :-) To me it appeared dark, deadly, and almost hypnotically beautiful.
ReplyDeleteYes, that's what I aimed for.
DeleteFast paced and dangerous. Great atmosphere.
ReplyDeleteToxic atmosphere on the planet. Thanks!
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