Welcome to another Science Fiction & Fantasy Saturday with snippets shared by writers.
Snippet from new short story
The setting and characters are related to those in my WIP trilogy.
A forest stretched from the rippling
ocher seas to the horizon on the uncharted planet of Janus. Violet swung the
flitter in a wide circle and descended to land on the narrow stony verge
between the trees and the olive green ocean. Above, voracious native vultures
soared with a third wing raised like a huge sail.
Psi Master Taranis sat beside her,
intent on the detector he had invented. His pursuit of the ancients who had
once ruled the galaxy had led to this uncharted wilderness. The silver band
around his brows was the sole indication of his superior rank of psychic power,
acquired in a combination of inherited talent, rigorous training and artificial
enhancements. The faint scar above his left ear suggested one of the ubiquitous
com inserts, but she had no idea if he had other implants. After three days of
travel in his company, she had become inured to the electric hum of his
radiated power. She had not anticipated her acute attraction to the lean
athlete with the strength and agility of a man a third of his reputed age.
“Did you get a clear reading, Psi
Master?” Violet said with the deference of her inferior status. She was merely
the hired help, a security guard, and was not sure why he had chosen her. Still,
he paid well, and she had been intrigued by the opportunity to guard one of the
rare psi masters. Her own native empathy was a low status, maligned and misunderstood
talent.
The Psi Master replied slowly, “Yes, the
signal is strong.” He glanced at her and waved to the forest, “Our target is
somewhere in the middle of the forest.”
I love the description of the world - very evocative. And the psi master is suitably mysterious. Good snippet!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Peter. The descriptions are excellent, really drawing one in; though I'll admit to getting slightly more interested from the second paragraph. Very intriguing.
ReplyDeleteI agonize over description vs action but SFF needs the details for the setting.
ReplyDeleteI just may be more a people person than a flowers and scenery... I love the scenery, but people are definitely more my thing. It's good :-)
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